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PostSubject: I AM INTOXICATED.....   I AM INTOXICATED..... Icon_minitimeMon Aug 31, 2009 10:53 pm

MY FIRST POEM....FOR FRIENDS OF..'AAPKA FORUM'

That very promise which someone had made to me,
Like a cobra, stings me every night,
And I, in a kind of drunkenness....
Remain subdued all the time.

I had heard from some story teller,
In the valley of the Himalaya,
In a lonely forest...
There was a deserted temple,
In which a venomous virgin...
Had become a priestess of a deity.
A cobra used to sting her everyday,
And that priestess,in the rapture of that venom,
Used to remain in a trance all the time,
By the feet of her deity,
When the trance faded,
The cobra used to sting her again.

In the temple of my love....
Intoxicated, I remain all the time.
When the intoxication fades,
The serpent of promise, stings me again,
And after forgetting everything....
In the same intoxication of the promise,
I remain lying as yet,
By the feet of the goddess of my love.


-K-KHEYAL
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PostSubject: Re: I AM INTOXICATED.....   I AM INTOXICATED..... Icon_minitimeMon Aug 31, 2009 11:08 pm

very nice kheyal

bohat shaid ase he cheez ha k pata bi hota ha
is main dard ha lakin is dard main bi apna he nasha ha

thanks 4 sharing
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PostSubject: Re: I AM INTOXICATED.....   I AM INTOXICATED..... Icon_minitimeWed Sep 09, 2009 1:25 am

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In the temple of my love....
Intoxicated, I remain all the time.
When the intoxication fades,
The serpent of promise, stings me again,
And after forgetting everything....
In the same intoxication of the promise,
I remain lying as yet,
By the feet of the goddess of my love.


Bohat I AM INTOXICATED..... 567740 deep thinking hey. ur such bhi. Mager aisa kion hota hey?
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